Writing
Describing the Information Given in a Table/ a Diagram
As can be seen from the table, …
From the table, it can be seen that …
Begin your paragraph
Use standard opening sentences to intoduce your report. Notice the tense used.
Even though it describes information from the past, the graph showa the information in the present time.
The graph shows …
Describe the Trends
Make two or three sentences to sum up the overall trend.
Then give some spesific information.
Decide on the most clear and logical order to present the material.
Notice the tense used. Here we are talking about the occurance of something in the past.
Basically, there are three trends:
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rose (to) increased (to) went up (to) climbed (to) boomed
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a rise an increase growth an upward trend a boom (a dramatic rise) |
fell (to) declined (to) decreased (to) dipped (to) dropped (to) went down (to) slumped (to) reduced (to) |
a decrease a decline a fall a drop a slump (a dramatic fall) a reduction
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levelled out (at) did not change remained stable (at) remained steady (at) stayed constant (at) maintained the same level |
a fluctuation reached a peak (of) reached at plateau (at) |
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Besides the above vocabularies, we can also use: |
fluctuated (around) peaked (at) plateaued (at) |
a fluctuation reached a peak (of) reached at plateau (at) |
Describing the movement: adjective and adverb
Give more information about the trends.
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· Describe the degree of change |
· Describe the speed of change
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Adjectives |
Adverbs |
Adjectives |
Adverbs |
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dramatic sharp huge enormous steep substantial considerable significant marked moderate slight small minimal |
dramatically sharply - enormously steeply substantially considerably significantly markedly moderately slightly - minimally |
rapid quick swift sudden steady gradual slow |
rapidly quickly swiftly suddenly steadily gradually slowly |
Write Conclusion
End with one one or two sentences which summarise your report to draw a relevant conclusion
Check
Does the report have a suitable structure?
Does the report use suitable grammar and vocabulary?
Does the report meet the requirements of the task?
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TA
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I am learning, trying to improve my bad writing skill, but I feel dumb! Hehehehehe…..sorry, thanks!
Hehe.. You’re not the only one, Sir. Wise man says “Practice makes perfect”, right?
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