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Describing the Information Given in a Table/  a Diagram

As can be seen from the table, …

From the table, it can be seen that …                

Begin your paragraph     

Use standard opening sentences to intoduce your report. Notice the tense used.

Even though it describes information from the past, the graph showa the information in the present time.

The graph shows …

Describe the Trends       

Make two or three sentences to sum up the overall trend.

Then give some spesific information.  

Decide on the most clear and logical order to present the material.

Notice the tense used. Here we are talking about the occurance of something in the past.

Basically, there are three trends:

 

  ↑

 

 

 →

rose (to)

increased (to)

went up (to)

climbed (to)

boomed

 

a rise

an increase

growth

an upward

trend

a boom (a

dramatic rise)

fell (to)

declined (to)

decreased (to)

dipped (to)

dropped (to)

went down (to)

slumped (to)

reduced (to)

a decrease

a decline

a fall

a drop

a slump (a

dramatic fall)

a reduction

 

levelled out (at)

did not change

remained stable (at)

remained steady (at)

stayed constant (at)

maintained the same level

a fluctuation

reached a

peak (of)

reached at

plateau (at)

           

 

Besides the above vocabularies,

we can also use:

fluctuated (around)

peaked (at)

plateaued (at)

a fluctuation

reached a

peak (of)

reached at

plateau (at)

Describing the movement: adjective and adverb 

Give more information about the trends.        

·           Describe the degree of change

·           Describe the speed of change

 

Adjectives

Adverbs

Adjectives

Adverbs

dramatic

sharp

huge

enormous

steep

substantial

considerable

significant

marked

moderate

slight

small

minimal

dramatically

sharply

-

enormously

steeply

substantially

considerably

significantly

markedly

moderately

slightly

-

minimally

rapid

quick

swift

sudden

steady

gradual

slow

rapidly         

quickly

swiftly

suddenly

steadily

gradually

slowly

Write Conclusion

End with one one or two sentences which summarise your report to draw a relevant conclusion

 

Check

Does the report have a suitable structure?

Does the report use suitable grammar and vocabulary?

Does the report meet the requirements of the task?

 

 

6 Comments »

  1. awaiting for your comment on http://www.writingkibipusbasa.blogspot.com

    much appreciated sis,
    TA

    Comment by roisnahrudin | June 18, 2008 | Reply

  2. Your effort is great!! I keep reading your students’ writing. May I be one of your students later?

    Comment by Yuline Monako | July 20, 2008 | Reply

  3. I am learning, trying to improve my bad writing skill, but I feel dumb! Hehehehehe…..sorry, thanks!

    Comment by Anton H Biantoro | September 3, 2008 | Reply

  4. Hehe.. You’re not the only one, Sir. Wise man says “Practice makes perfect”, right?

    Comment by Yuline Monako | September 3, 2008 | Reply

  5. lin, my students at the first semester in ump have problems in writing especially in writing detail supports. i also decided to make a thesis on this problem but it’s still in abstract one. if u have some more data about it please let me know ok. tengkyu, sis…. p.s. ati2 bulan puasa di negri org banyak godaannya…terutama makanan…mmhh..enuakh hehe

    Comment by ayik | September 13, 2008 | Reply

  6. Hi.. I am so glad that you are taking Post graduate program now. If our previous lecturers got surprised to see you, what will their reaction be while seeing me hehehe..
    About your thesis, I can help you get a link to get some valuable references. Try this one:
    Go to URL: http://www.proquest.com/pqdweb
    then type: ID: DEPNIKNAS1
    Password: dikti (small letter)
    Happy writing..

    Comment by Yuline Monako | September 14, 2008 | Reply


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